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December 10th, 2009, 5:11 am

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Reply Lynnnn, December 10th, 2009, 5:13 am

I'm not sure about my grammar. XD'''

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Reply rainysidewalks, December 10th, 2009, 7:48 am

only grammar thing I see is you might want to have it be "I thought you'd never come back again" instead of "anymore" ^^

your banner is so cool *.*

Reply Kaiarynn, December 10th, 2009, 1:17 pm

Grammar You don't have to care, but here is what I think it might should be for the third panel. "Did you know? When Lill turned up here, I was really surprised. I though you would have already killed her, but because she was still alive, I reasoned that you must have relented instead, and didn't do it."
By the way, fabulous page. You are doing an amazing job! :D

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