Ch05_P12

October 25th, 2008, 5:29 am

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Reply anoni mouse (Guest), October 25th, 2008, 1:53 pm

"Dont employ you in such a way" doesn't make sense, try "Don't act like that" instead.

:Edit Yay, a cuddle from Lynnnn, my day has been brightened very much.

Reply Lynnnn, October 25th, 2008, 4:15 pm

@anoni mouse Thank u verymuch! xD
*cuddle*

Reply BlackCatz, October 25th, 2008, 4:26 pm

LOL ~ I'm really enjoying this comic ~

Reply LightCrusader_011, October 26th, 2008, 1:03 am

Mike looks like a voodoo doll on the 7th panel... LOL xD nice one!

Reply Jellyfishgirl (Guest), July 25th, 2013, 10:39 pm

'Your fault' not 'your debt'
He doesn't owe her anything- it's just he made a mistake so he is at fault- and also before during the part when mike was segueing with dewlyens father about his *punishment* not a debt-
I've only recently started reading this but I above noticed a lot of sentences where they use therefore when it's not needed or it doesn't read right and is worded wrong, I'm sorry to be picky but it's like I have to reconstruct a sentence out if the words you give us to make sense of the while story.
I really enjoy the story but bad grammar or sentence structure is a vexation for me.
Sorry but I thought I would long it out since it seems no one else does that much.
Maybe they're just not as picky as me.

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