Ch05_P07

October 4th, 2008, 4:03 am

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Reply Wondrey, October 4th, 2008, 9:24 am

Awwww that's so cute XD

Reply surrube, October 4th, 2008, 2:21 pm

wut?

Reply EvilLuxan, December 13th, 2008, 7:36 am

You have to remember that this is the first time for us readers to read this story. We don't see this in the same way as you do because this is allready clear in your mind. And by that you at least need to show us the whole situation, like a picture where you show us the whole bicycle with her on it. Try to focus on the surroundings a little more :S I don't know where they are or when this is. Stuff likt that is a tad important.

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