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December 21st, 2011, 10:00 pm

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Reply day-dream-shteen, December 22nd, 2011, 4:17 pm

Grammar 1) Move the "was" in the first speech bubble to before the "really"'s
2) "So many wounds" instead of "so much wounds"
3) "I didn't know what to do" instead of "what I should do"
4) "that's all I wanted" instead of "that's everything I wanted"
5) "That you wouldn't leave me behind" instead of "don't let me behind"
6) "wasn't important" instead of "were not important"


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Reply CITRUS.LOVE, December 22nd, 2011, 4:26 pm

awwwww so sad.... ;__;

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