Ch07_P05

December 19th, 2011, 10:00 pm

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Reply day-dream-shteen, December 20th, 2011, 4:30 pm

Grammar Corrections (If you get annoyed by these corrections, please don't hesitate to ask me to stop xD)

1) In the first panel, it's a lot more natural to say "Why..." and then change the 2nd panel to "...haven't you asked what happened?" Alternatively, you could keep the 1st speech bubble the same, but change the second to "...not asking what happened?"


Only one this time! :)

Reply Lynnnn, December 24th, 2011, 8:14 am

No its super. Thank yuo very much! xD

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