Ch07_P04

December 17th, 2011, 10:00 pm

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Reply TsubasaArisato, December 18th, 2011, 1:33 am

STORY TIME? WHAT KYEL?
*is excited*

Reply day-dream-shteen, December 18th, 2011, 2:35 pm

More Grammar Corrections Tee hee? xD


1) "covered in blood" instead of "full of blood"
2) "bring you back to the apartment" instead of "put you back"
3) "take care of your wounds" instead of "vet"
4) "on my own" instead of "by my own"


:)

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