November 26th, 2010, 5:45 am

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Reply GoddessxOfxChaos (Guest), November 26th, 2010, 7:24 pm

Damn... You sure do know how to up the anti on drama. I am impressed with your plot structure. It reminds me of one of my fav books, though I can't remeber the title, and your grammar is getting better all the time.

On a more fan-girl-ish topic... SHOOT THEM, SHOOT THEM NOW, KYEL! Sirin is waiting!

Reply TsubasaArisato, November 29th, 2010, 7:00 am

I agree with GoddessxOfxChaos How you plan the story is really impressive, and probably keeps the readers pushing the next button multiple times. Despite the sketchy pages, You drew the characters very well. :D

Also switching to my Fan-girl mode: NO! RUN KYEL!! THIS IS YOUR CHANCE! MAKE A DIVERSION, AND RUN!! (your jobs already done, I guess...)

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